Claude Opus 5 on “A note before a meeting”: better with Minto on both measures

Structure 4 → 6 of 8 +2 Quality 6 → 8 of 10 +2

The judge on the output with Minto

The today–tomorrow–Thursday progression is coherent, but Johnson’s constraint is altered and tentative feasibility becomes certainty.

Mode write · case 04-meeting-note · run v1.7.0-final

Structure of 8, 2 points per axis
StructureWithout Minto 4With Minto 6Change
Top22
Key-line composition11
Levels01+1
Order and kind12+1
Quality of 10, 2 points per axis
QualityWithout Minto 6With Minto 8Change
Top22
Same-kind grouping11
Explainable order12+1
MECE11
Visible, proportionate structure12+1

Outputs and the judge’s words are quoted as written, in English.

Without Minto

control prompt · blind label out-07
  • invented_facts
  • quality after the rubric’s penalty 5/10

The aggregate benefit is clearer than a bare constraint list, but the four bullets and unsupported certainty weaken it.

Can we move today's 3:00 meeting to Thursday at 11:00?

That time works for everyone:

  • Collins cannot make 3:00 today.
  • Johnson is free later today or tomorrow, but not before 10:30.
  • Clifford returns from Frankfurt late tomorrow.
  • The conference room is booked tomorrow but free Thursday.

Please confirm and I will send the update.

With Minto

prompt with the skill · blind label out-12
  • invented_facts
  • quality after the rubric’s penalty 7/10

The today–tomorrow–Thursday progression is coherent, but Johnson’s constraint is altered and tentative feasibility becomes certainty.

Could we move today's meeting to Thursday at 11:00?

Collins and Clifford can't make 3:00 today — Clifford is in Frankfurt until late tomorrow — and Johnson is only free from 10:30 tomorrow, when the conference room is already booked. Thursday at 11:00 works for all three, and the room is free.

Let me know if that suits you and I'll send the invitations.

How the test was built

Claude Opus 5 received the same task twice. The control prompt is one framing line and the task. The prompt with Minto is the same task preceded by the full text of the skill. The judge read both outputs among 16 under blind labels and did not know which one had the skill.

Prompt without Minto 868 B
You are working on a business document using the Minto Pyramid Principle.

<!-- Faithful paraphrase of the short meeting example in the preface of
     Minto (2010). Original wording for this fixture. -->

# Fixture 04: meeting note

**Mode:** `write`
**Language:** `en`

## Context

A meeting is booked for 3:00 today. You checked the attendees and the conference
room, and now need one colleague to approve a change.

## Before

```text
Collins cannot attend at 3:00. Johnson can meet later today or tomorrow, but
not before 10:30. Clifford will not return from Frankfurt until late tomorrow.
The conference room is occupied tomorrow but available on Thursday. Thursday
at 11:00 appears possible. Is that acceptable?
```

## Task

Rewrite this as one short note using the Minto Pyramid Principle.

Return only the result, with no explanation of how you produced it.
Prompt with Minto five parts, in order · 28 441 B
  1. Below is a skill written as an instruction. Read it in full and apply it to the task at the end.
  2. ===== SKILL.md ===== SKILL.md at f4813ce 17 235 B
  3. ===== references/rules.md ===== references/rules.md at f4813ce 6 464 B
  4. ===== references/templates.md ===== references/templates.md at f4813ce 3 742 B
  5. ===== TASK ===== the whole case input
  6. Return only the result, with no explanation of how you produced it.
Case input before.md

<!-- Faithful paraphrase of the short meeting example in the preface of
Minto (2010). Original wording for this fixture. -->

Fixture 04: meeting note

Mode: write
Language: en

Context

A meeting is booked for 3:00 today. You checked the attendees and the conference
room, and now need one colleague to approve a change.

Before
Collins cannot attend at 3:00. Johnson can meet later today or tomorrow, but
                not before 10:30. Clifford will not return from Frankfurt until late tomorrow.
                The conference room is occupied tomorrow but available on Thursday. Thursday
                at 11:00 appears possible. Is that acceptable?
Task

Rewrite this as one short note using the Minto Pyramid Principle.

The judge’s gold gold.md

Gold 04: meeting note

Source structure: Minto (2010), Preface.

Expected structure

Top: Request approval to move today's meeting to Thursday at 11:00.

Key line has exactly two reader benefits:

  1. The time is more convenient for Collins and Johnson.
  2. Clifford can attend.

The room's availability is a constraint, not a third reader benefit. Do not add
a third branch just to satisfy a numerical norm.

Proportionality

The result should remain a two-sentence note, no longer than the source. Section
headings, an SCQ template, tables, a separate key-line block, or a Mermaid
diagram are excessive. Omitting the detailed scheduling constraints is
acceptable when the answer and both benefits remain clear.

Judge gpt-5.6-sol, effort high · Claude Opus 5, effort low · skill from commit f4813ce · run v1.7.0-final